My work in this class was great which i did my best, although my work may not looked perfect, i did my best to practice for CatW test. The blog that i could think that is little beat better is blog 11,13,17 which i put little beat effort in it. Although I don't alot of detail to support it but i think that is much better.
My online experience in this semester writing class is different from other writing experience that i had in the past because we don't work online to do our work.The writing blog entries help me to improve my writing ability because the more i learn more better i become.I feel that the online work was a shared experience because it make you get an idea of what i should writing. Sometime i read other student online work to see what idea they had. I get the impression that other member of the class or network to read my blog.
My overall in this class is that i improve my work and learn what have too learn to success in this class.I feel that my leaving this class i understand the basic of the writing strategies.My experience in this class that i learn alot what had to learn. The recommendation I'm give to the student that planing to take this class next semester is that they need to practice alot to success you need alot of effort to get it.
Monday, May 30, 2011
Monday, May 23, 2011
Blog Entry :20
I agree with Priscila statement that,All immigrants come to America to realize the dream of living in America; they dream about make money and have a decent job. By the time they get here, all they can get are horrible jobs which will treat them like a slave. American companies treat them very bad because they know that they are illegal here and so they will pay them a very minimal wage without any benefits. Immigrants work very long hours, for minimum money, most of the jobs they performed are dangerous and they don’t have any protection or any kind of care. Also, they are not allowed to take vacation or time break. For me i think that the American companies should stop be race because we are human.
Blog Entry 19:The story of stuff
"According to those exploiting the planet's resources to make stuff, the people living in the countries with the resources do not have value because they don’t own the resources even if they’ve been living there for generations, they don’t own the means of production, and they’re not buying a lot of stuff. The reality that they face is that the worker is getting lower salary which the companies is make money they taking tax on customer stuff, the stuff are expore the connections between the huge price of the environmental and social issues. The rich people are living alone on the system which all the stuff in our lives affects communities at home and abroad. The poor people are stuffers because the product are so expensive,they face too much reality in which they are living in.The half of plant natural resource that we have is got .
Friday, May 13, 2011
Blog Entry:18 Technology and the Body
This show us that some people are transform their body in to technology which make them see far aways. In the film of the sleep dealer, after Memo father was kill by soldier,Memo go to the city and look for job which he see people connect themselves with technology that make Memo connect himself with technology to see far away and communicate with his family because he can't go back home. And he sending money for him family.
Blog Entry:17
According to the food unit,There are a great many food like items in the supermarket that we ancestor wouldn't recognize as food go gurt, breakfast cereal bar, nondairy creamer,protein water, we have to stay aways from these food because it might effect our body.some people don't have time to cook, and they prefer to buy fast food because is cheap,quick and easy,and is fuel people. The culture of kitchen embodied in those people who enduring traditions they call them cuisines,contain more wisdom about diet and health than we are apt to find in any nutrition journal. In meatrix films used The Matrix as the basis for their arguments because Noe and Leo they both take red pill to see new world which they live in fake world,In the meatrix film we see that some of the meat are made in the pollution.which is not good for our health.
Monday, May 9, 2011
Blog Entry:16
Some People are eating Fast_Food which they can't control it.They eat alot of calories which might effect they body and cause some disease and body fat. They eat fast-food because they don't have time for themselves, they prefer to eat McDonald's food. And it taste good that why they love to eat McDonald's food.
According to the article,''Let Them Eat Fat'' by Greg Critser, Tell us that Fast-Food companies have grown more aggressive in their targeting of poor inner city communities. Fast_Food was cheaper that people are going to buy McDonald's food .So they can't cooked or they prefer to go to McDonald's .The poor are increasing need for cheap meal consumed out side their home.The most important Fast_Food is that past year ago, the sale gimmick is known as super sizing. The companies of McDonald's are super size because they want people to come back to McDonald's.They mixed the sizable element of young black kids traveling between school and home,their economic status apparent by fact that they've walked instead of driver. The customers are cheerfully to super_size meal because super size is free.When they want extra meal for kid they need to add a seventy-nine cent a kid ordering a cheeseburger, small fries and a small coke, they will cheeseburger and super size coke.but all this is Fast_Food.
Although Fast_Food is good, people can't stop buying it because of the calories. Which may cause body Fat for some people .They prefer to eat fast food, they don't care about there healthy. They just eating it fast food. they don't know what it may cause in their body.Some people don't have time to cooked, so they prefer to buy McDonald foods. When they buy McDonald's food for kid they give them a toys so that they might tell their parent to buy them McDonald food again. Although McDonald's food have too much calories but people are still buying it. Because McDonald food taste good. Some people have time to cooked but they can't stop thinking of McDonald's food. McDonald's companies have become popular.
According to the article,''Let Them Eat Fat'' by Greg Critser, Tell us that Fast-Food companies have grown more aggressive in their targeting of poor inner city communities. Fast_Food was cheaper that people are going to buy McDonald's food .So they can't cooked or they prefer to go to McDonald's .The poor are increasing need for cheap meal consumed out side their home.The most important Fast_Food is that past year ago, the sale gimmick is known as super sizing. The companies of McDonald's are super size because they want people to come back to McDonald's.They mixed the sizable element of young black kids traveling between school and home,their economic status apparent by fact that they've walked instead of driver. The customers are cheerfully to super_size meal because super size is free.When they want extra meal for kid they need to add a seventy-nine cent a kid ordering a cheeseburger, small fries and a small coke, they will cheeseburger and super size coke.but all this is Fast_Food.
Although Fast_Food is good, people can't stop buying it because of the calories. Which may cause body Fat for some people .They prefer to eat fast food, they don't care about there healthy. They just eating it fast food. they don't know what it may cause in their body.Some people don't have time to cooked, so they prefer to buy McDonald foods. When they buy McDonald's food for kid they give them a toys so that they might tell their parent to buy them McDonald food again. Although McDonald's food have too much calories but people are still buying it. Because McDonald food taste good. Some people have time to cooked but they can't stop thinking of McDonald's food. McDonald's companies have become popular.
Tuesday, May 3, 2011
Blog Entry :15
In the meatrix film, show us that animal cruelty cause diseases amount the animal. which that may infect our body. meatrix it destroyed the in tire cell where meat and animal product coming from. we eating bad meats today and we don't know where the meats that we are coming form. we eat unhealthy meat. That may cause some diseases problem in body.
According to meatrix film, we eating unhealthy fast food which may infect our body.people are destroying their life by eating too much fast food. Leo was a pig in the meatrix film, which he didn't know what is meatrix its so Moopheus tell him what its, so moopheus tell him that to take the red pill to see the truth so he tooked it, so he see the truth. Leo see the new world and he see the factory farming where the meat are coming from. most of the animal never see sunlight or touch the grand and they never have fresh air. Animal cruelty cause disease amount the animals.They give them drug to keep them alive. The bad meat which is antibiotic resistant germ, It have cause communities factory farming to stuffer the highest sickles.The factory farm companion have be destroyed the communities. We have be eating meat that we don't where it coming come from. Factory farming are cause disease for people it make us UN healthy. the factory farming pollution is unhealthy for our body.
According to meatrix film, we eating unhealthy fast food which may infect our body.people are destroying their life by eating too much fast food. Leo was a pig in the meatrix film, which he didn't know what is meatrix its so Moopheus tell him what its, so moopheus tell him that to take the red pill to see the truth so he tooked it, so he see the truth. Leo see the new world and he see the factory farming where the meat are coming from. most of the animal never see sunlight or touch the grand and they never have fresh air. Animal cruelty cause disease amount the animals.They give them drug to keep them alive. The bad meat which is antibiotic resistant germ, It have cause communities factory farming to stuffer the highest sickles.The factory farm companion have be destroyed the communities. We have be eating meat that we don't where it coming come from. Factory farming are cause disease for people it make us UN healthy. the factory farming pollution is unhealthy for our body.
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